Project one was about analyzing a place. It was an
interesting project and one thing that I felt like I did fairly well on was the
actual analyzing of the Student Recreational Center. I go to a gym everyday so picking out
differences was not very difficult for me. Just small details like there are
cardio machines on two different floors is something that I was able to pick up
on. I also learned a lot about the different aspects on the SRC I interviewed
one of the personal trainers and it gave me a new view on just working out in
general and a broader knowledge on weightlifting about form and just small
little things. I struggled with comparing my views with the various writers
that we were told to compare too, I just did not really fully understand the
concept and would have needed an example to completely understand because that’s
how I learn and it just slipped my mind but I should have asked. Besides that
there isn’t much I really struggled on maybe grammar with some commas and the
basics that editing takes care of but overall I felt like this was a good
writing process, it was something I have never done before so I enjoyed it. After
this process I feel like I will change my writing process by going into further
depth about just everything I write about. In high school not a lot depth was
needed for papers and it was easy to get away with. After going into depth with
this paper I have a greater knowledge of the topic that I wrote about and it
feels good on my part to know that I actually have some knowledge about what I wrote
about if that makes sense. In this project I felt like I almost reached the
depth on analysis needed no one’s writing is ever perfect so I will never feel
like I did something that is completely asked for I always feel like I can do
better and that is with anything in life. I feel like this project can help me
out in the future with almost anything that I do in my life and will help me
with work and other classes. With work there is never a problem with going more
into depth it can only have your boss appreciate you more. With my job my boss
always appreciates going over the top and I work for a catering company so that
implies going into depth with conversations with customers etc. so overall I enjoyed
this project a lot and all of the things that it required me to do.
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